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Twisted images crafted by a horrid figure,
Plaguing more than you would think.
Too many crying eyes that constantly disfigure.
Take a breath and try to blink.
Evil goliath creatures with tongues that shall lie,
Whispering to broken girls.
Every doubt is amplified to depths that whisk by,
Forcing tears down brimful curls.
Evenings are followed with a desperate mind’s eye,
It cries on vanity’s base.
Each one of Job’s comforters gone with a sigh,
She lifts the mirror’s dirty gaze.
Vacant eyes stare ahead at the rigid corners,
Wets streaks, and a sorrowed face.
Vacillating from thirty pieces of silver,
To call others from this place.
Sought out to deny the truth and believe the fake,
Girls paranoid to their fears.
Sentiments leading to an internal heart ache,
Silencing jovial cheers.
Twisted images believed from a horrid figure,
Plaguing more than you would hope.
Too many crying eyes that will always disfigure.
Take a breath and learn to cope.
Plaguing more than you would think.
Too many crying eyes that constantly disfigure.
Take a breath and try to blink.
Evil goliath creatures with tongues that shall lie,
Whispering to broken girls.
Every doubt is amplified to depths that whisk by,
Forcing tears down brimful curls.
Evenings are followed with a desperate mind’s eye,
It cries on vanity’s base.
Each one of Job’s comforters gone with a sigh,
She lifts the mirror’s dirty gaze.
Vacant eyes stare ahead at the rigid corners,
Wets streaks, and a sorrowed face.
Vacillating from thirty pieces of silver,
To call others from this place.
Sought out to deny the truth and believe the fake,
Girls paranoid to their fears.
Sentiments leading to an internal heart ache,
Silencing jovial cheers.
Twisted images believed from a horrid figure,
Plaguing more than you would hope.
Too many crying eyes that will always disfigure.
Take a breath and learn to cope.
This was an assignment for my Pre-AP English class.
I hope I sorted it correctly.... haha.
Been working on it since the beginning of January and it's FINALLY finished.
Had to use literary terms and such, obviously.
I don't want to post what it's about, I know it's vague, but try to guess what it is.
Comments/Critique please! (: Thanks.
I hope I sorted it correctly.... haha.
Been working on it since the beginning of January and it's FINALLY finished.
Had to use literary terms and such, obviously.
I don't want to post what it's about, I know it's vague, but try to guess what it is.
Comments/Critique please! (: Thanks.
Comments5
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Oh crap! Thats creepy good... Almost sounds like a girl's inner grievings(sp?) She feels self-conscience and depressed? Or basically, 'A day at highschool' XD